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Joffre Swait's avatar

Good stuff, I enjoyed it!

Since you asked: Nika rather than Nike might be helpful in the fourth stanza. I thought the third line of third stanza worked well, four heroic stresses.

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Paso Robles's avatar

Wow, thanks.

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